Wednesday, 6 May 2020

Ryan's pig

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2 comments:

  1. Raquel Parsons6 May 2020 at 16:34

    Hi Ryan
    Well done for posting on your blog!
    I enjoyed reading about your hunt with your Dad. How exciting, shooting a pig!
    When you reread through, make sure to add full stops where you are pausing.
    Remember to add your reflections too.
    Ka pai
    Mrs Parsons

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  2. Mrs Devine6 May 2020 at 20:37

    I am glad some of you who enjoy hunting have the oppotunity to go hunting with your Dads, Uncles and Granddads. It must be hard to the town kids to stay home all the time don't you think?
    Ka pai,
    Mrs Devine

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